1. **Introduction Enhancement**: The opening paragraph could briefly mention that not all moles with dark spots are dangerous but that being cautious and informed is key. This balances urgency with reassurance. 2. **Clearer Structure**: Use subheadings for each section (e.g., “What Are Atypical Moles?” before “The ABCDEs of Moles”) to create better flow and organization,
3. **Preventative Measures**: Expand on sun safety practices. Mention specific sunscreen types (e.g., broad-spectrum SPF 30+) and additional protective measures like seeking shade. 4. **Empowerment Focus**: Highlight that self-monitoring can significantly aid early detection and that most cases are manageable if caught early, to reassure readers